Poem for school; is is good enough???

Question: Poem for school; is is good enough!?!?!?

At my school we are making a calendar and i wanted to know if this was good for an entry for February!.

On Valentines day
I got you a rose
But it wilted
I got you chocolates
But I ate them
I got you a card
But I left it in the rain
All month long I tried
To think of a gift for you
Because you mean so much to me
But as I thought i realized
No rose nor card could ever show
The way I love you so
So instead I wrote you a poem
Sealed with a kiss
So there you have it my dear
My love; I love youWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

By god! this is a sweet poem! If were a teacher, I would give a freaking A!. (no lies)Www@QuestionHome@Com

its not bad but probably u shud try a diff approach by writing the poem in a way that any given audience can relate to it!.!.!.!.!.!.lemme ask u something tho!.!.were u assigned feb 14 or u chose it caz den if u did alot of ppl wud probably choose feb 14 to write a poem aboutWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like it, but i think you should separate it into stanzas
sometimes it helps the reader understand the main ideas of the poem
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I really enjoyed this poem, well done!. We are not all good at getting the gift right and on the right day and your poem spells out love in abundance!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's cute!.!. no proffessional poem but it'll do!. depends how old you are/ what grade your in/ and what class your writing for!. if its a college poetry course!.!. i'd say noWww@QuestionHome@Com

I think it's fantastic!. It's funny, meaningful and sounds genuine!. I wouldn't change a thing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

this sucks dude, it doesn't rhyme, its not interesting, and it doesn't flow!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It seems ok , but you shouldn't make it sound so cheesy!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's wassup, I really like your poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's cute but it doesn't really have a nice flow to it!. I love the last 4 lines thoughWww@QuestionHome@Com

I think its really cute!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow!.!.!. That's amazing!. Use it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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i love it?Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it!.!.!.it's so cute:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

i liked it!.!.!.!.!. funny and odd at first but sweet at the endWww@QuestionHome@Com

awww <3 it!. yep u should use itWww@QuestionHome@Com