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Question: What should i call this poem!?
Humpty dumpty sat on my heart
Humpty dumpty broke it apart
All my crying now and then
Couldn't put it together again
Tears will roll
Teeth will be clenched
Eyes squinted hard
Letting out a deep breath
I'm so sorry
I cant shake it off
I cant just forget
I am way too upset
I want to be alone
So turn out the lights
Shut the door
For the night
Maybe if I get some rest
I wont be so stressed
But when I close my eyes
All i see is you
Who knew youd be there too

I need a really good name for it!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like this :)
No Match For Nursery Rhyme Torture!. :
All My Hearts Defenses (like all the kings horses!.!.!.)
Vulnerable To Attack

Answer mine!?
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omg, i really like this poem! -gives it a star-

for the name!?
hmm -thinks-

Anywhere i go i see you

idk srry thats all i can come up with, but i REALLY love this poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

what you should call it!?
sh*!
lol jk but yeah you couldn't publish that or anything it would be copyright(or w/e its called) you stole the humpty dumpty thing
i liked it thoughWww@QuestionHome@Com

A shattered egg

Humpty Dumpty REMIX


i'm not sure Www@QuestionHome@Com

First off, you wrote a wonderful poem!. I like it very much!.

Title: Saved by a memory Www@QuestionHome@Com

Fragments of our heartsWww@QuestionHome@Com