Question Home

Position:Home>Poetry> How do you like these poems?


Question: How do you like these poems!?
-Underneath a clear blue sky!.-

A child plays with a little pink ball
Bouncing up before its fall
Excitement seen gleaming in her eyes
As she watches her ball bounce up so high

Her little ball oh so round
Playing with it without a sound
When it rolls away with a start
So shall she follow with all her heart

Onto the pavement both should go
Unaware of the approaching foe
Trying to swerve it gives off a shrill shriek
While the mother feels her legs grow frail and weak

Noticing her daughter to little to late
Death had already planeted its bait
Legs carrying her as fast as they can
So towards the street she ran

When she hears her child's laughter
She could only weep all the faster
Holding her daughter in a sweet embrace
As teardrops stream down her face

With her being so sad her daughter begins to cry
Underneath a clear blue sky
A mother soothes her crying daughter as she wept
For the life of her little girl had been kept!.

_____________________________________
-Secret Crush-

Cheeks tinted with a rosy blush,
excited from the slightest touch,
fantasizing about your secret crush,
the one you've thought about so much!.

You want your lips pressed against theirs,
but how can that happen when you have yet to reveal,
your love that you want them to hear,
and the desire that you've begun to feel!.

How will the one you admire,
take what you're about to tell,
of how they set your heart on fire,
and how you fell under their spell!.

You can't help but wonder what they feel,
you know your heart can't take much more,
this moment is to good to be real,
for now your with the one whom you adore!.

These are all poems I wrote, none of them are sad as there is to much sadness in this life we live already!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i have only read secret crush, and i could relate to it so much!. it is very touching and real!. it is absolutely amazing!.
keep up the good work!
Www@QuestionHome@Com

The first one was great!.


answer mine!?
http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com