Is this poem good????????

Question: Is this poem good!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

We see the poppies
On our hearts
Remembering the day
Soldiers fought,
Dying for us
With fearless courage
Never defeated

is this good!?
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

We see the poppies on their hearts
at second glance, the missing body parts

Imaginings the days and dark nights
the soldiers, so long they fought
dying alone in a strange land
freedom for their lives they brought!.

There is always fear, but fear with Courage
Always a time of defeat, but never completely beat!.
The war rages on but some battles are never over!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's a nice and the point of it is clear, but you mite want to think of a substitute word for poppies!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Maybe start with these lines
"With fearless courage
Never defeated"

They seem a bit redundant and plain!.
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Yes but No iiff so0metiime yo0u do0nt riite eno0ugh peo0ple wo0nt get the po0etryWww@QuestionHome@Com

It's okay, just a bit short!. Doesn't really excite me when reading it!. Sorry!. lol!.Www@QuestionHome@Com