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Question: Do you like my poem!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
im 12 and i wrote this poem!.
doesnt really ryhme!. i wrote it in 5 min!.

you made my heart beat fast,
you made me look twice,
you made me love you,
and now im hypnotized!.

once you left,
my heart just stoped,
you never came back,
my eyes stayed shut!.

now you exspect me,
to let you back in my life!?
just like that!?
what if you hurt me again!?
what if you leave!?
do you think im that stupid!?

well i am,
i never stoped loveing your smile,
loveing your eyes,
loveing you!.!.!.
- inspired by new moonWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
thats cool!.I am going to write a love poem!.sad but happy!.when I post it please tell me what you think!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

sure !.!.!. its a pretty good poem good job!Www@QuestionHome@Com