Question about your opinion about this poem?

Question: Question about your opinion about this poem!?

My little town is my best friend
It stood by my side for 10 years
It has a big river and lots of other friends
My little town is the best in the west
It protects everyone like it's child
It has a lots of really nice people
My little town isn't like the rest
I can never get lost in my little town
It is the best compared to the rest
My little town is not that big
But my little town loves me very much

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It's childish, but that could be worked to its advantage!. You could make it into a book for children, along with illustrations!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think its good! But I also think that you should do some more rhymesWww@QuestionHome@Com