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Question: Rememberance day poem!? please read, help!!? !?
will you suggest changes for it!? continue it!?

its just for english class!.!. what do you think!?

i wouldnt be here,
in a free country,
if it wasnt for you!.

i wouldnt have a voice,
among the masses
and the greed,
if it wasnt for you!.

i might live in fear!.
in madness,
if it wasnt for you!.

you,
the brave,
the hopeful,
the strong,
fought for us!.
died for us!.
to live free!.

thank you!.


hum so will i pass!? any help on this one!? Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like it as is!. I think you should do fine, depending on your teacher's criteria for the writing!.

I would just keep it as is!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a really simplistic poem, but at the same time has lots of depth and meaning!. I'm sure you will pass with flying colours!. Good luck with it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice, leave it as is!.Www@QuestionHome@Com