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Question: Critique My New Poem: JiJi is Back!?

My heart is full of happiness
JiJi is coming back
JiJi is coming back to Me
My joy is over flowing
The sweet flower is back
I will hold her between my arms
The beauty of the world
The love of my heart
JiJi is back
The dark clouds have vanished
The angel of light I can see
My heart is dancing
My breath is sweltering
JiJi my love is back

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