Can you relate to my poem?Its called Breaking Free?

Question: Can you relate to my poem!?Its called Breaking Free!?

I feel like im living a lie,Must break free before I cry,For all who call me quiet,I'll break free and start the riot,Today I sign the Decree,The Decree that Breaks Me Free!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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That would make a good song!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very much so, as my poem, "sick", depicts a similar situation;

Sick of tears,
sick of trying,
sick of fears,
sick of lying

sick of pretending,
every day,
I will no longer,
live this way

Sick of hiding,
who I am,
my life has been nothing,
besides a scam

sick of feeling,
completely alone,
striped of my flesh,
exposing the bone

sick of living,
my life in fear,
and every night sheding,
a silent tear

sick of the sorrow,
the constant pain
someone please save me,
I'm going insane!

I was not made,
to be your slave,
I know I am stronger,
I know i am brave

This isn't the life,
that I was meant to live,
I have so much more,
I was meant to give

It's time to stop,
and say goodbye,
I refuse to continue,
to live this lie

I like yours very much!!! Keep up the good writing, and I hope you break free as you desire! <3Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like what your poem says!.
I can relate somewhat!. I have been there and you have expressed it very well!. To the point and with no flowers!.
Thank you for your poem!.
Peace
Psst!.!.!.what lie are you living, that makes you want to cry,( scream!?)Www@QuestionHome@Com

i can relate to it, but i think it's a little cheesy!. too rhymy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i can totally relateWww@QuestionHome@Com

Thats really good! Go ahead and share it with the world!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

that's quite passionate i really like it ! well done Www@QuestionHome@Com

thats very goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

yes i feel the same wayWww@QuestionHome@Com