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Question: WHAT DO YOU THINK OF THIS (love poem critics)!?
LOVE SHOWERS; There are showers in the forecast but it isn't rain, it's love!. It's pouring!. No need for an umbrella!. Let's get soaked mamas!. No need to dry off!. Let's stay wet!. You're the rainbow after the storm!. You're that beautiful cloud in the sky that just wont quit!. Redish, pinkish raindrops!. They say rain or shine and that's exactly what we do!. We make it happen during both!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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is this a poem of yours or a poem for you!? it may help to understand it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it's okay!. I mean I am a very poetic person off all kinds!. But because you didn't press enter and separate each line, it's kind of hard to tell what line goes with another!. But if I read it right it's better than I thought at first!. I had to read it a couple of times though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its pretty good! but yea it'd help if it was seperated line by line

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please answer mine! :PWww@QuestionHome@Com