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Question: Got time for a short poem!? !?
Pour your essence over me,
then take a journey through my soul!.
I have chained up my resistance
and have locked my will to yours in a kiss!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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Very , very lovely!. It is such a romantic and endearing poem!. Lucky is the woman for whom this was written, and beautiful is the soul who wrote it!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow! And what brought this on!? Hmmmmm!?
Completely abandoning yourself to another, is the deepest trust of all!.!.!.stated eloquently, and succinctly, in this poem!.
You are good! with short forms!
Keep this up!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Delightful, such saucy verse,
Lock, chain, and inner journey!.
In expression terse
It enchanted me!.

[You're not my type either, but it's a poem that's not gender specific!.]Www@QuestionHome@Com

Minimalist poetry written well are gems to be savored over and over!. This is a gem to be savored! Well said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It sounds like a cope of wanting just that one touch, that one kiss to make you feel completely!. I love itttttttttttttttt!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

It says so much in so few words!.
Beautifully said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love a man willing to commit!
No, seriously friend, beautiful!.

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Your loving soul shines in this poem!.
Wonderful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Write that on a card with a dozen roses!.!.!.you will do nothing wrong for the next year, guaranteed! Well done!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Short, lovely and sweet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very Beautiful, Know your wife loved this one!. Bless her heart!. Bet she loves you very Much!. God bless!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds like honey and leather, but I don't think you are my type!.

Seriously though!.!.
Neat little poemWww@QuestionHome@Com

i get this feeling u may be talking about me today!.!.!.thanks 4 the star cuz i feel like one todayWww@QuestionHome@Com