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Question: Cemetery eyes!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!?
cemetery eyes
digging graves in my soul
cold as the arctic
blacker than coal
steel edges staring
once glowing with youth
now appear hollow
and long in the tooth
blinding frustration
a maniacal haze
facing the mirror
holding my gaze
examining all
leaving nothing unseen
cradle to coffin
and what lies in between




















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My fav phrase !.!."cradle to coffin
and what lies in between "
An appropriate poem for Halloween!. I like it much!. For some reason I stumbled on L10, the word maniacal seemed to trip on my tongue!. But that may just be my novice opinion!. :-) I love the dark visual of this, good job!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Everything Sin said and more! She is a good reviewer of your words!
I sense a real connection!.

Morning, angrypete!.
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THat is the best poem i have ever seen on yahoo ((no offence to others))

that is so deep

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I like it,it's goodWww@QuestionHome@Com