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Question: Easy to read from a pen run dry!?
There was a time, long time ago,
when words I wrote would swiftly flow!.
From deep within to pointed pen,
of this and that where I've never been!.
Of war and trees and eagles high,
of spring and fawn, and darkened sky,
and then as swift as sunset night,
the voice within bowed out of sight!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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Interesting, but you need to work on lines 4 & 5!.!.!.not quite right!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that is really good, i especially like the way you talk about not being able to write well anymore but that message is in something that you have written so well!. Fantastic
Please review my poems!.
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thats great, wish i could write lke u!! the pen is still flowng hunny x

mine pales in comparison but here it is http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com