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Question: Like my short and sweet poem!?
"A Better Place"
The wind carries my
thoughts to a better place!.
A place of rolling hills,
friendly trees to climb and
sit upon, and an ocean of wonder
to gaze at under a blanket of stars
and moon so bright you can't help
but want to stay up all night!.
A!.Jay Harmony
age;14
Oct!. 30, 2008Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow this is great
i know nothing bout poem when im 14
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awesome!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like it,a nice place to be!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes, your poem is very sweet!. It makes me feel happy to read it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com