Like my short and sweet poem?

Question: Like my short and sweet poem!?

"A Better Place"

The wind carries my
thoughts to a better place!.
A place of rolling hills,
friendly trees to climb and
sit upon, and an ocean of wonder
to gaze at under a blanket of stars
and moon so bright you can't help
but want to stay up all night!.

A!.Jay Harmony

age;14

Oct!. 30, 2008Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

wow this is great

i know nothing bout poem when im 14

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awesome!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it,a nice place to be!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, your poem is very sweet!. It makes me feel happy to read it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com