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can you make a poem that's about a friend who stopped being the other persons friend IN THIS CASE YOUR THE FRIEND WHOSE BEING HURT FRIEND NOTHING ABOUT LOVE no this isnt a assignment promise im just doing this for fun enjoyWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: brown and ruffled scruffy hair, Big blue eyes that shine and glare!. He stares at me, I turn the other way!. Why would i talk to someone whom i have just been betrayed!? He gives me a pleading look with eyes that seem wise But i know the truth behind them, Just a bunch of made-up lies!. He hooks you on him, Like a fish!. He was the one with which you had your very first kiss!. I liked him at first, Maybe even thought i might burst, With happiness of course!. But in due time, He loses his mind, And begins to swerve off-course!. He decides he just wants to be friends, I look into his eyes!. How could i have beleived in him and his silly made up lies!? All the nights of "I love you" Gone with the wind!. But maybe i can recover!. The past is the past, after all!. But to some like me, The past is the present!. Sorry, i know u asked for a friend thing, but i meant for it to seem like they were friends, they grew to like each other, then fell apart again!. I also made it up on the spot sooo!.!.!.yeh Www@QuestionHome@Com I lost a Friend Today I lost a friend today, I didn't see her pain I was too busy with my own life to notice the sadness in her eyes, the emptiness in her voice I never realized that just a kind word or a hug from me would let her know she was not alone in the world I took for granted her friendship not knowing she was crying out for mine I assumed she knew we were friends even though I never told her so I lost a friend today She looked ok the last time I saw her--or did she!? She tried to talk to me but I was tired so I just made polite conversation She knows she can talk to me anytime about anything, doesn't she!? I feel so alone now, is this how she felt!? She always seemed to be just fine, didn't she!? I was here for her, wasn't I!? I lost a friend today Things will never be the same She came into my life at a time when I needed a friend Her friendship was unconditional I never once thought this would happen so soon Now she will never know what her friendship meant to me God help me, I lost a friend today!!Www@QuestionHome@Com idk um: My Feelings of Betrayal As my body breaks apart!. As I stand there thinking, My heart feels like its sinking!. I feel betrayal I feel emptiness I feel lossed I feel like I just got tossed As I remember our memories As I remember our friendship I feel like I just got ripped I feel so cold I feel so sad As I turn away, A flood of tears start streaming down I feel lonely and disconbobulated I knew I just should have waited It was a ridiculous fight I got her infuriated Now I knew she for sure hated me There was no reason denying it She got in a stupid fit But I know!.!. Its over For good As I pull up my hood, My legs cant move I can not force my legs too much I can not bring on a form of such As I start to think, Her words come back to me: "I dont care, you were never a good friend," "You and I both know were done,goodbye go have fun!." The End Www@QuestionHome@Com "I tell you the truth There is no greater love than this That a man lay down his life For a friend!." (J!.C!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com |