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Question: Would somebody comment on my 'Voice' poem please!?
This voice cries out
From within
Pleading for
A special place
inside another

This voice cries out
"I'm weak, hold me"
Longing for
A special place
beside its mother

This voice cries out
for all to see
but shunned away
by Apathy

This voice cries out
amidst the cold
Fighting for
a century

This voice cries out
beneath the sea
For someone close
to please save me!. Www@QuestionHome@Com


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