A New Medium Poem ...... Comments ?

Question: A New Medium Poem !.!.!.!.!.!. Comments !?

!.!.!.The Compromise…

At each
Oak’s dawn
In hard –
Wood medium,

I slumber out
A sodden hollow,
Through twisted
Polished kin!.

Studded walls
My avenue
A psychic’s
Guiding beam

Common setting
This milieu
Where form
My semi-stays,

Go-between
I take in hand
Shy’s glory’s
Pulsing mime

To rushing
Channels
Of golden mean

“Diviner”
I must sigh!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

As I arose I warned her
She would not be safe
Stay right there, babe
Down the hall I stumbled
Bouncing off of thoughts in my head
Shaken not stirred I returned

Please quit laughing, babe
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This medium has promise in the economy of the verses, reading almost like Haiku!. I like how you have explored the qualities and richness of oak, and using them as a metaphor for structure of the mind!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Medium in title and job description but the poem stands tall! well done!. ok I have to ask!. what is the!.!.!.er!.!.!.dare I say!? hang up!? !.!.!.sorry!!.!.!.with medium height! I am sooo wanting to know!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

I haven't a clue what this is about!. But, I didn't really mind spending time finding that out, I wasn't doing anything important!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The best thing about Oaks is you never get bored with their company, Nature is so kind!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A very good poem describing the morning grind!. OK, that's what it said to me ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like the "pulsing mime" thing!.!.!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

You cease to amaze me with your genius!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well, okay!. You take what you can get in life!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

loves it Mattie!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oak !.!.
my ancestor as I am just a little acorn
not medium at all!.!. just small!.Www@QuestionHome@Com