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What is the best poem you made by yourself !? any kind of poem please!.!.

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Why is it!.!.!.!.
That your breath echo's in the rain!?
Are you attempting to build a rhythm,
That may demolish the pain!?

How can you!.!.!.
Hide your mouth under that veil!?
Are you trying to shield your cries,
Before the storm grows stale!?

Why do you!.!.!.
Swallow the screams in your lust!?
Are you trying to grind the surprise,
Into nothing but dust!?

Who is it!.!.!.
In the shelter of that curtain!?
Will you hide who you should be,
Until your stranger is certain!?

Why can I!.!.!.
Still smile at your melodious laugh!?
Even if it's false,
Even though truth is behind glass!?



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Don’t buy cheap Canoes

In the forest, what to do!?
“The water’s rising”, ah! Canoe!.
“Quick withdraw it, with due haste”,
But on my tongue appeared a taste
Of strawberry!? A sign of rain,
Or from that sugar candy cane!?
A tang of which I’d never mustered,
Wait, the taste had turned to custard!.
Billy cried, from the back
“Row harder now, take up the slack”
I tried to concentrate but failed
For past a bear we swiftly sailed!.
A bear!? I began to wonder
Good canoes, they never sunder!.
(Sunder means to break in two
For “simple” folk like me or you!.)
“What’s happening!?” I screamed “Oh fiddle
The canoe has snapped right down the middle!.”
It then appeared to us as true
That this was not a good canoe,
In fact the opposite was sure,
The quality of build was poor!.
Then that funny taste returned,
Like coal, in my mouth it burned
A hole, that began to grow,
The taste was jalape?o!.
That’s right, a chilli pepper flavour,
Of which I did not crave to savour!.
“It really hurts”, I came to wail,
My mouth ascended the Scoville scale!.
I went to dunk my head but stopped,
The chilli pepper flavour swapped
To ice-cream, mint choc chip,
Then to Nestlé’s walnut whip!.
Next, the essence, it was very
Similar to glacier cherry,
A fruit of which I would devour,
Yet, alas, it morphed to sour
Lemon, my face constricted
Into wrinkles that depicted
A Shar Pei dog, (the ones with creases)!.
A flavour like pineapple pieces
Then decided to emerge,
I turned angry, was on the verge
Of jumping in, so therefore braced,
But was already to my waist
With really rampant torrents coming,
My fingers and my toes were numbing!.
Then my arms, my shoulders too,
Had just succumb to sunk canoe
‘Ping’ a light bulb, north my head
Appeared and so I proudly said,
“The flavours of which I’ve succumb
Came from my changing chewing gum”
So without pause, I blew a bubble,
We re-emerged, floated from trouble!.
Well, I say we, my half did,
Bill’s half hit a power grid!.
Don’t you let this tale confuse,
The moral – Don’t buy cheap canoes!.


Sam Brown!.
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I don't know if it's my best, but it's definitely one of my favorites!.!.!.

Route 8 and Branchton Road
at Ejub Grcic

On July seventh, two thousand and three; there was a meeting

Who would have known so much could explode
When two masses of metal on screeching wheels met

Multiple deaths; five physical, but who counts dreams!?
It’s unknown, because so much was blown up
When two masses of metal on screeching wheels met

Who could’ve guessed that they would see death
The eyes of those in the car on the seventh
Severing connections with love forever
When two masses of metal on screeching wheels met

There was a mother, a father, one son, and two daughters
In a car, on a mountain road, heading home—
If only they could have somehow slowed!
As the madman drove, speed out of control
When two masses of metal on screeching wheels met

“Stop!” pleaded the sign and “Please!” screamed their minds
A hint of death in all but two of those eyes—
Two playful, innocent, only four-year-old eyes
That couldn’t see the concept of so much colliding
Unable yet to understand the idea of dying
When two masses of metal on screeching wheels met

He was their death
A man left dreaming of his smoldering tanker
Five bodies forever residing in flames inside
His mind a mess of horrible images replaying
A father on fire asking if his family is fine before expiring
Time does not heal, what the mind cannot let
When two masses of metal on screeching wheels have met

-Kevin Dublin
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Cold is pain full
Air is thick
Breathing makes me tired
Fat makes me sick
When I sleep my dreams are of perfection
I fake a smile
And hate my reflection
When I can’t
I lie awake
And think back
To today’s mistakes
I’ll try harder
I’ll draw the line
How much longer
Till perfection is mine
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I wrote a sequence of Sonnets sporadically one night!. They I call, as in so far, the best of what I've done!. Yet, know I well, have I, many better poems to write!.
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