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Question: Tell Me What You Think Of A Poem I Wrote!.!?
Yes Victor Has A Touchy Side!? Tell Me What Ya Think!.
Baby, nothing's better than you and me
I look around an all I see
Is love and laughter and memories
Baby, you and me, we both know
Our love will do nothing but grow
You tell me things I've never heard
Your words come to me like a singing bird
I look at you and start to smile
Because then I know it's all worthwhile
I sit and think of you and me
Thoughts of love just come to me
You're my world, my heart and soul
Deep inside, we know the goal
The goal for us is the be together
From now till then we'll last forever Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
aaawwww!. kinda cheezy, but its so sweet, its almost like intended for it to be that way!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
it sounds beautiful but more like a song than a poem
maybe if you split the lines like this
baby
nothings better
than you and me
i look around
and all i see
is love and laughter
and memories
and so on but it is your poem and it is really deepWww@QuestionHome@Com
It sounds like you copied it from a song!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
very niceWww@QuestionHome@Com
niceWww@QuestionHome@Com
its heart feltWww@QuestionHome@Com