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Question: What do you think of my short-ish poem about depression!?
" Life of Depression"


The darkness surrounds me
Unable to escape its walls
Living without happiness
Breaking all the rules

Could this be a nightmare!?
Will there ever be an end!?
A stop to all the sorrow I feel
Everything won’t surely mend

My thoughts focused on voices
The sounds came from above
Lifted from my depression
The dreaded life I’m now free of

I was accepted into this world
Surroundings seem so surreal
Confused as to how I got here
Unsure of what I truly feel!.




Hey everyone, i'm 15 and I made this up as i went!. I now think it is about a person who is depressed and cannot escape the truth!. Finding a cure, but not one of the best!. Ending their life the person then went to a dream like place!. My version of heaven

i hope you liked it!.


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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
If you wrote it on your own then its a great poem!.I can relate to it a lot!.Its an awesome poem!.Just loved it!.Hope to hear more awesome poems from you
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Depressing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it, well doneWww@QuestionHome@Com