Question Home

Position:Home>Poetry> Do you like the poem i wrote?


Question: Do you like the poem i wrote!?

i wrote it for my ex bf who hates me now but i still love him him ALOT


Thanks A Million


I feel the time has come,
for you to listen,
for i am numb,
and very deeply broken,
i have always wanted a good outcome,
for we where always well woven,
you are very welcome,
to have been my companion,
all i can say is "thanks a million"


Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Very good! You have a real talent!.!.!. I really like the line "for we were always well woven"

BTW it's were not where!.!. Aside from that minor thing it's great!Www@QuestionHome@Com

sorry im stealing your space!.!.
by the way nice poem I like it

THoUgHt PoEm !.!.!.

a mind full of coffin
for the antagonists
once the lid closes
peace to this world

Burn the leaves
rolled in paper
peace with my finger
holding a cig

My original
designed
cloud colored
flawless ring,

floats in the air
as it turns to air Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think that is very very good it sounds like you put some thought into this you expressed your feelings very well for a 13-year old i think you have a good career ahead of you!.!.!.keep in mind though if someone doesnt like what you write to bad thats their opinion to me you are
very talanted in the poertry departmant Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah, its pretty good!. Hey, I know I will sound like a annoying adult but focus on your gift of poetry and other things that make you happy ( besides boys)at least till high scool is over with!. It will help you go further in life!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

omg love
great poem and that's just really wow!. love it!! it's a really great poem!!

if someone could read mine plz the link is:
http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index!?!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

not bad young blood!. ;) hehe!. i totally gotcha on that one!. but dont let ur door always be open to him!. if he's a jerk, for love of pete, close the freakin door!. lol!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

To me, a poem isn't a poem unless it describes your feelings!. If this is how you felt when you made this, then great job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think you have some real potential!. Www@QuestionHome@Com