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Question: Should I buy this guy an eye!?


An Eye for an I


the eye stared at me in utter revulsion
digust was visible in his myopic glare
my offer before him was still on the floor
I dare not hold it over him
my fear of execration was thinly veiled by my honor
his years above me known
and now he was the needy one
so much he gave to so many for so long
a sense of self his rewards
I was insistent in my intent
he would see again at my hand
the eye would be mine yet his to hold
his views to me were too much to lose

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Buy him the white part and sell him an iris COD!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You can't lend an eye to a blind I !.You can't lend insight to a blind heart!. He'll have an I, and be able to look and see, as soon as he open his eyes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Rastaman vibrations, Baby, I repite!. Live like you want to live!."
Eye and I vibrations!. I and my eye!.
Today, you should listen to Bob Marley!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

You offer to look at the world through somebody else's eyes!. And he, in turn, will see by using yours!? A fair exchange!. We do that here every day, I think!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sometimes, we don't need poetry at all!.

We just need to say "Listen, man, I offered up a truce and got nothing in return!. What can I do now!?"Www@QuestionHome@Com

Buy him an eye or else he may make a spectacle of himselfWww@QuestionHome@Com

Yes!.
You are a good brother!.

Love, RoscoeWww@QuestionHome@Com

some are big some are little and one in need really never has to ask another because what you see is a brother!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice poem!.!.!. So unusual!.!.!. I like this style!Www@QuestionHome@Com

give him all that you can!. especially that eyeWww@QuestionHome@Com