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Question: Poem!?What Does This Mean to you!? What do you picture!?
in times of death
you were my light
you were dead to the world
but to me so alive
screaming at me
picturing my hands on your pants
a public display
a picture in the window
but to me much more
i knew you had it in you
thanks for coming back
to you all the worlds a stage
to me the stage is overrated
show yourself!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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idk if im right but this is what I picture

someone special to you made it big
in the show business or brought up popularity for himself

but for you the guy on stage isnt really the "special someone" you know its actually a public persona or an image he portrays
so his "stage" or his "public persona" doesnt appeal to you

idk thats what I pictured!.!.!.
hope im right

9 out of 10 Great Job! =)
I like it !.!.
I can feel something out of it Www@QuestionHome@Com

The beginning of the poem lines 1-4 caught my attention!.!.!.
It had me thinking that in your times of need this special someon was there for you, and even though to the world he's no one, to you he's everything!.

From lines 5-11, you lost me

From lines 12-16, I'm thinking the same as I thought in lines 1-4

Try being more consistant, and deeper in your writing!.

Oh!.!.!. one more thing!.!.!.!. stop being so mean and insultive to people on
the net!.!.!. you wouldn't reach far in life with that attitude!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The beginning of your poem really made me wonder what inspired you!. A significant other perhaps!? A man you really adore!?
Yet, at the same time, its seems as if this man is having difficulties showing his true self to you!.

Thats what I recieved from this poem!.

A tip: screaming at me
picturing my hands on your pants

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but to me much more
i knew you had it in you
thanks for coming back


Kind of threw my whole mood off!. Try to hit a little deeper here, more rhythm!.
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it means that you had a problem that you couldn't figure out, and that your love helped you thorugh it, and thanking for comming back, even though i treated you badly
thats what i think, its really good for cheating on your poetry compWww@QuestionHome@Com

I think if you kept at it, you could possibly have some talent!. I like that you didn't feel the need to rhyme every other, it's kind of like Burkowski, but without the depth or meaning!. Keep at it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

are u in love with someone!?it has such deep thoughts!.a touchy one,wish the one whom u love understands the depth of this,and responds to your love,really v!.goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

It means nothing to meeeee
Aaah Vienaaaa!.

Bit of Ultravox for you!.

EDIT: Yeah that's right, I 'have no soul'!. Get over yourself!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

for me it means that someone left you behind and came back and brought you to life again shine your lifeWww@QuestionHome@Com

uh!.!.!.!.sketchy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

some thing to do with love!?!?!? your gess is as good as mineWww@QuestionHome@Com

its strange!? i dont even get itWww@QuestionHome@Com