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Question: Will you dream tonight!?
"Lock-jaw, boy!. You
shoulda known!."
Dirty words from a blistered lip
an old face with a bitter jaw
and eyes that tread water in his head!.
Sideways glancing at the dog
I wake up with a critic at my throat
and my fingers
knotted!.

Hate is a gift we refuse to return!.
Pestilent wishes feeding the churn
of paper bag lunches
served on great oaken planks
of discordant armies
and falsified ranks!.

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Your words speak volumes of love!.!.!.hate gives you hives on the soulWww@QuestionHome@Com

Since i read this i will dream of this bllister lip,old face bittered jaw person!.But i refuse to hate as close it is in my soul!.!.Too many good things out there now to have hate my soul!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your question!.!.!.My dreams are nightmares that wake me each morning!.
Your poem!.!.!.Your fingers seem to have un-knotted!. (ok YA how do you want me to spell that)!. As this write clearly shows a pen that is flowing smoothly!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Excellently said!. NEVER return hate!. It hurts the hater more than the hatee!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is much more rewarding to smother with love!.!.
I do not know why some people just need to be cranky!. I hate it when I become so!.

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NiceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeWww@QuestionHome@Com


"Hate is a gift we refuse to return!."

Amazing, man! Just amazing!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well that goes and changes everything now!.
Read mine too pleeeease!Www@QuestionHome@Com

L5's ' drowing inside ' is very cool!. I can see the desperation!.
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Yes, I will dream of two sons, both of whom I'm so proud!.
One who struggles still
and one who is victorious now!.

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I might dream if I ever go to bed!. LOL!. Great poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love you!.!.!.Smmmmooch!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Kill 'em with kindness!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hate is a gift we refuse to return!. I love that line!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i dream only when good appendsWww@QuestionHome@Com

again i say what!?Www@QuestionHome@Com