Do you lkethe poem i wrote ?

Question: Do you lkethe poem i wrote !?

this i wrote for my ex bf i am 13 years old

Thanks A Million

I feel the time has come,
for you to listen,
for i am numb,
and very deeply broken,
i have always wanted a good outcome,
for we where always well woven,
you are very welcome,
to have been my companion,
all i can say is "thanks a million"

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

WOW! that's something!. well done you, its a beautiful piece you've done there!.
it goes with the flow i like it a lot xxWww@QuestionHome@Com

I think its great work for your age level
and for any age level for that matter!.

But I can see a lot of potential in you and I think that you will gain in your skills as you go on and you keep practicing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You're 13!?!!?!!!?!!?!!? WOW- Nice work! Keep it up- stay with English classes- you have a gift!Www@QuestionHome@Com

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yeahWww@QuestionHome@Com

i really like it!.!.!.good job! :]Www@QuestionHome@Com

yea it's cute!. i like itWww@QuestionHome@Com