Do you like the poem i wrotefor my ex bf i am 13?

Question: Do you like the poem i wrotefor my ex bf i am 13!?

Thanks A Million

I feel the time has come,
for you to listen,
for i am numb,
and very deeply broken,
i have always wanted a good outcome,
for we where always well woven,
you are very welcome,
to have been my companion,
all i can say is "thanks a million"
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Amazing:D
it's dark, without being too dark!.
And i love the "Thanks a million"Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, the poem is nice!. I don't believe you wrote it though!. However, I do think you are playing head games with the answerers in this forum!. How can a 13 yr old girl tell her ex boyfriend that she is 'numb' and 'deeply broken'!. Do you even know what that means!? It's very difficult for me to believe that you are 13 yrs old and can write so evocatively about a relationship!. I think you have copied this poem from an adult source and that you are a very good liar!. I feel you are violating Yahoo Guidelines and Terms of Service!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thirteen years of age and already you have an ex boyfriend!. Young lady the people have changed since I was a thirteen year old!. I did not have a girlfriend until I was at least 18 years of age!. Way back in the 1940's it was not done!. I am not saying we did not have girl friends but not in the serious manner it is today!. Anyway to your poem!.

I think that you really let him know how you felt at him giving you up!. Perhaps you are better off without him!.

May I suggest:-

I feel the time has come
for you to listen!.
You left me numb and
deeply broken!.
We had a good outcome,
always well woven,
always welcome!.
as my companion!.
And so I say
"Thanks a million"

Perhaps something a little stronger for him!?

The time has come
for you to listen!.
I am not numb
now you are gone!.
My eyes still glisten
at my good fortune
for my heart sings a
happier tune!.

So I conclude with, Just get on with your life young lady!.

Robert

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13 is far too young to have a boyfriend, ex or otherwise!.Www@QuestionHome@Com