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Question: Complacent and Still!?
What do I do!?
What do I say!?
I'm feeling naked,
Showing too much skin today!.

I scream and I shout,
I'VE GOT NOTHING TO SAY,
WHAT DO I DO!?
Someone replies,
Just be you!.

I mock and I laugh!.
I am no way to act!.
You're a fool, a dingleberry, aloof!.

You make normal look crazy,
You make fun seem faded,
I sit still unphased and complacent!.

Sweat trails down my forehead,
HELP ME! I REALLY NEED HELP!
I'M IN A DIRE SITUATION AND ALL I CAN DO IS YELP!

Coming closer,
Time goes fast,
Violent confrontation,
Leads to divergent situations,
Too bad I took the silent path!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This poem has more confrontation than the one where you said it was hard to breathe!. It sounds frantic, urgent!.

I hope you're only making poetry!. If this is for real, you're in my prayers!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Er!.!.!.different!.Www@QuestionHome@Com