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Question: What do you think!?!?!? !?
the looks and glances i see from beyond
imitating a stadium at the peak of the game
the score is now tied
the win can be lost
i look from beyond
what i see is applause

why oh why has this happened to me
why oh why am i here
landed here, straight onto earth
why oh why am i here

i was chosen as one
own book of beliefs
unsure of the range
why oh why am i here

is there a god
is their a destiny for me
do i chose my own
or was it inscribed before

my life is full of questions
most of which go unanswered
but thats okay
i teach myself
when nobody is here to teach me
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
awwh, this has nothing to do with this!.
but!.!.!.
awh, i see you told your mom!.
how did she take it!?
is everything okay!?
don't be scared, btw!.
the doctor isn't going to hurt you!.
they might take blood to see if your ferreal pregnant!.!.though!.
girly, goodluck!.
&&keepintouch!.
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Really, that is way too long!. I do not have the time or energy to read it!. I don't have the attention span either!.

Shorten it up and get to the point!Www@QuestionHome@Com

The law of our hearts
is broken so often
beautiful
art of lies
an oscar
for disguise

Sweet words
sugar coated
a bait to kidnap
trust

pain inside
searches
but
theres no exit


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very good
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This is pretty good!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Girl you are gooooood!.!.!.!. : )Www@QuestionHome@Com

i LOVE it!


its so good (:Www@QuestionHome@Com

good grand !.Www@QuestionHome@Com

good but not my cup of tea , ill still read them for support but i really think your getting to the point are if you keep it up we will be seeing your work published some day good job

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