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Question: Can you feel winter coming and see beauty in the season!?

Eyes seeing colors
Shades of orange, yellow, red
Dancing in my head

Morning air steaming
Swirling outside my windows
Like spirits dancing

Wind crisply nibbles
On my extremities bare
Winter soon will be

Wish I could snow ski
Might then enjoy the winter
The cold white landscape

Winters cold kisses
Leave me chilled and seeking warmth
Let me fly south now

With Canada goose
Join their ranks and navigate
The season to escape
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I have taken the bait and am being gently pulled through haiku after haiku, and I see the beauty that surrounds me as I never have!. I love Southern California, the heat, the winds, all of it!. But your poetry has drawn a lovely picture that takes me into the crystals of snow, and I don't mind the chill!. This is beautiful!.t
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For the poem, it is very nicely put!
For the Winter, the mountains of Utah remind me of the beauty of snow, but also they reminds me of slippery Icy roads, and snow-tires, and the cold that chills the bones!. I love the three other seasons!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

As this is only a poem with three lines in each stanza, I think it would have been an easy matter to have had the first and third lines rhyme!.
The second line in the third stanza may be better read as "On my bare ears or fingers"!. or even "At the tip of my nose"!.
For all that It is quite a picturesque write!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is very clever to create a poem with a series of Ameri-Kus!. It appears the poet has ambivalent feelings regarding approaching winter!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Last line has 6 syllables but all is cool because this string of Ku's rocks!Www@QuestionHome@Com

When I read it, it was kind of like "umm!.!.!.what is she talking about!?" Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, It takes my breath away!.Www@QuestionHome@Com