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Question: Is this a good poem!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
You know I like you,
Forever in a daze,
Will my heart be set on you,
Is it a crush or love that leads my way,
It is the mystery that my words speak,
Countless in the hour,
To be with you to hear your voice,
My anger and sadness slips away,
It is like a dream were I cannot awake,
Mysterious winds of love rapped around my head,
Were my head is lost but my heart is found,
Slowly awakenings my eyes so they see,
My love is dearest, as fondly as you shall seek,
Something wonderful and unique reached out and drew me to you completely!.!.!.
Yes i did write it myself! ThAnKs!!!!!! =DWww@QuestionHome@Com
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dang!.!.!.now im jealous! :SWww@QuestionHome@Com
Nicely put together your thought about your crush on yours !.!.!.!.!.!.!.
Only the line I could not get the impression where you are saying, I quote, "Were my head is lost but my heart is found"!.!.!.!.!.!.Were, and is lost me on that line!. Otherwise beautifully expressed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
The answer's "no" and the word is "where", not "were"!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes this is a very good poem Www@QuestionHome@Com
aw!. that's sweet
in some ways, i find it true for myselfWww@QuestionHome@Com
coolWww@QuestionHome@Com
OMG when u were 11 thats AMAZING???Www@QuestionHome@Com