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Position:Home>Poetry> Would you care to comment on another conversation?Question: Would you care to comment on another conversation!? Living Room CSI by C!.S!. Scotkin I came home early from work, looking forward to lunch, finish my day’s charting, while I had a munch!. As I stood in my warm kitchen I overheard them clear!. I walked into the living room Found just what I feared! George and Gracie, nose to nose, in the middle of the floor!. ponder the fate of the Gecko King, Bubba, whom I adore! Georgie: Well, Gracie, dear! We did it! I feel we did it right! Gracie: What do you mean “we” did it!?! Do you want a bite!? Georgie: Not right now, I’m not in the mood! Besides, it’s still breathing, don’t play with your food! Gracie: Georgie, I’m holding on to the tail Why don’t you grab his head!? Bubba: Back off! You freaking mammals! I’ll bite your lip instead! Mom: Gracie, drop that Gecko! Before I grab the broom! Epilogue: As I threatened , as I railed Grace bit down, Bubba flailed! life intact, but quite de-tailed! Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: This is darling! Poor little Gecko!. Do the tails grow back!? So, did George and Gracie get the striped muffler back!?Www@QuestionHome@Com The poets have quite a menagerie: cats, squirrels, bunnies, dogs, wolves, a rooster and heaven knows what else!. But these two take the cake--or the gecko!Www@QuestionHome@Com There's lots of good sci-fi about gene splicing human and gecko DNA!. I don't know about cats and humans, except maybe the cats would like to see more tuna in everything!.Www@QuestionHome@Com OH! I laughed out loud upon reading this! We live in the mountains and my two are forever bringing in lizards and mice and such!. You tell an amusing "tail"!. Good job!Www@QuestionHome@Com oh your tricky suspense! and i liked the good ending, only de-tailed!. haha! Www@QuestionHome@Com Lol Very creative!.Www@QuestionHome@Com very nice!Www@QuestionHome@Com i love this poem!! i hope its going in the baby's book!Www@QuestionHome@Com Don't you hate it when they do that!? My cat, Rimmer - (how he got that name is a long story I won't bore you with), would get some poor little mouse!.!.!.and tease it!. Let it go and pounce on it, and maul it about a bit, and let it go!.!.!.etc!. If I tried to rescue the mouse, he would pick it up and run off with it!. I know it's natural!.!.!.but, I still hated it!. I'm glad Bubba Gecko got away to fight another day!. What does CSI mean!? A very amusing poem, and it takes a while before you realise that it does all rhyme!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |