What do you guys think of this poem that I wrote? (:?

Question: What do you guys think of this poem that I wrote!? (:!?

Yeah, it is a re-post!. But I want to get some more opinions!.

I really don't know what happned
I was trying to see the good and hoping for the best,
When only I was blind!.
I really thought you were the one,
Even though in my heart, I know there could never be and "you and me!."
And I guess "us" just wasn't even worth while!.
Now now I close the blinds and try to forget your face!.
And I'm better off without you anyways!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

its!.!.!. simple!. i like it!. its to the point!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

ok your poem i so good and there is alot of feelings on it that mack me know that u are a girl which it is very clear!! !.!. PUT u need to reflex ur feelings and thoughts with a littleeeeee words ( i really i thuoght that u a one ) !.!.( u was the one and u heart my one)!.!. (the second one is your heart ) u mean a few words with more meaning and feelings see my poem( i love and i wish to forget my soul with u !. if i loose it i wish looose it with u if u forget me when u love me the life comes when u not it runes !.!. i wish i foregt i wish i wishWww@QuestionHome@Com

The message of the poem is good, but the rhythm isn't very smooth and don't say "anyways" say "anyway"!. Its quite a sweet little poem though ")Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm kind-of creative and not so into specifics!.
But, I'll say it can tell alot about you!. Just "Pretty it up" and try not to leave it so blatant!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

aww it's really sweet and i kno how it shows inside your heart!. My best friend just dumped this guy who's a biggg ego and she thonght that they weren't meant to be together so yeaaa!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love that, you are really good! i wrote some poems 2! http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

not muchWww@QuestionHome@Com