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Question: The Traveler!.!.!.!.free verse!?


The Traveler:

Pain trapped-Mortality Short
dandelions white-comfort Nix
amity everywhere-windows open
distance-drifting-going away
A storm-hail-lost a float
lightning crashes-fire burning
together entwining-Amity
to be left-slept-awake
sand washing-streets long
hard journey-Ahead Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i like it
its short but good
it as if they were the thoughts of the traveler
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