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Tonight we sit together, shadows cast by flickering candle light!. Softly we tremble and stutter for we are too cold to make sense!. Wet coats and bloody hearts drip at the front door!. our minds, like pant bottoms, can never be kept clean from the winters' salt!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: This poem sounds like if it is in the 1800's or 1900's!. But, no hard feelings!. I like because you use the five sense: Touch Feel Tastes Think Hear Www@QuestionHome@Com generally i like it! i think the line "and stutter for" would be better as "and stutter, for" i like the beginning with candle light and ending with salt stains but I would like it to be longer and deeper in detailWww@QuestionHome@Com Very NiceWww@QuestionHome@Com |