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Question: RE-POST: PLEASE RATE MY POEM!!?
I want to see what other people think of it!.


I really don't know what happned
I was trying to see the good and hoping for the best,
When only I was blind!.
I really thought you were the one,
Even though in my heart, I know there could never be and "you and me!."
And I guess "us" just wasn't even worth while!.
Now now I close the blinds and try to forget your face!.
And I'm better off without you anyways!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Disregard the I'll pass comment!. It is your creation and that alone makes it unique and beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it, it is pretty and it is your creation so I give it a 10:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Er, I'll pass!.Www@QuestionHome@Com