Critique My New Poem... The Shredding of JiJi ?

Question: Critique My New Poem!.!.!. The Shredding of JiJi !?
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Fantastic!
The emptiness of the empty white space really captured my imagination!. And the title was just splendid!. Who is Jiji it left me wondering!. I only wish it was a little longer, but still it left me feeling satisfied but hungry fro more!.Www@QuestionHome@Com