Position:Home>Poetry> Please Rate my poem? Is it good or Should i just throw it out? do you have sugge
Question: Please Rate my poem!? Is it good or Should i just throw it out!? do you have suggestions!?
Another dimension in space
another spectrum of light
seen only in the strangers face
heard only in the silence of night
no one will ever know
yet some may still care
what is beyond the glow
after death how we fare
we must live without knowing
seeing only what is to be seen
senselessly we just keep going
only on what is known we are keen
some things we cant know
many things won't be understood
the river of life will still flow
with blind faith as it should
we don't even have hope
things will never be better
so the world hangs from thick rope
grasping this suicide letter!.
Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i like this!.KEEP IT!!!!AND WRITE MORE POEMS!.!.AND LET US READ IT!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Well, my response is to tell you there is hope if you find God!. I have and I feel safe that my soul will live in heaven in a happy place!. This the response that it made me give!. It moved me to be concerned for the writer!. It's not a bad poem!. I don't think you should throw it out but I do wish that you would see that there is hope after all!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like your poem, please keep it!. I write poems also, it helps me to express myself!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Its good!. I like it!. It get it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I love it!. :) Www@QuestionHome@Com