Opinions on my poem!!! PLEASE! (:?

Question: Opinions on my poem!!! PLEASE! (:!?

I wrote it just now!. ^_^

I really don't know what happned
I was trying to see the good and hoping for the best,
When only I was blind!.
I really thought you were the one,
Even though in my heart, I know there could never be and "you and me!."
And I guess "us" just wasn't even worth while!.
Now now I close the blinds and try to forget your face!.
And I'm better off without you anyways!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

You girls are always so good at writing these things!. Text wise you are fine no problem!. Content wise it good but depressing!. Do the Backstreet boys make you feel this way!?

I had a friend at work that would write poems all the time and she wanted my opinion!. Well they all were about being dumped by guys and wanting to kill herself!. After reading her poetry almost everyone wanted to kill themselves or at the very least gouge their eyes out!. Please don't let your work turn into that!.

If you want to put your feelings into something try a diary!.

Good Luck

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Evil abuses human
either a laughter of humor
or a laughter of mockery
hands for high five and to wave good bye
or middle fingers up and index to point at
faces and styles to compare and fight
or to show uniqueness and beauty to me (lol jk)
words to make up lies and curse
or to talk to have fun
and to love and flirt
or ears to shout at disturb the mind
or ears to whisper secrets between the twoWww@QuestionHome@Com

its definitely straightforward and simple!. i like it! comment mine!?

http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index!?!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I lyk it!. Its honest!.Www@QuestionHome@Com