What do you think of my new OMG Poem ?

Question: What do you think of my new OMG Poem !?

!.!.!.OMG!.!.!.

Yeah you !
just keep rollin'
all about the shag
floppin' about
the walls of savings
wailing them desperate
arms and sweatin' your
sinners repent -
and you think
anyone cares or scares
of the vile
you dribble
from your crazy mug
pug bazztards
You all, who stain
the words of Him
stuffing it with sweaty
praises of forgive me nots
of right we ares
wrong you ares
if you ain't like us's
and here yee all
my men
who
one day will
raise your roof
raise your
helll
until you taste the
freakin' evil
ways
you faint!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Tell it like it is bro!. Religion truly is a double edge sword!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

OYG
He not for me
He who has son
Run fron the one
Sold as a savior
Wrongful behavior
Righteous man leader
Bottom scum feeder

Craggy cliff waiting, funeling the few, right of wrong, the rest drawn to the vortex!. The lemmings are coming, the lemmings are coming!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Who on earth understands God completely!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.I would say no one!.
But many take refuge in Jesus message, and God gives one the right to choose, our choices on lif'e's journey and the door is always open,
Jesus had no religion, he had a message!. Blessings Be!.

edit!.!.!.!.Don't knock it till you try it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds like hydropro! Do you mean 'feint' - disguise!?

I like it!.!.!.a rant and a half!. This rap is good!.

Of course, I'm not religious, so would not find this provocative!.!.!.but, there are plenty who will!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hmmm!.!.!.!.!.a provocative rant against organized religion!.
Stay spiritual, don't let them turn you off completely!.

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Very interesting!. Definitely grabs ones attention and makes and drives home your point!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very very nice! Never let them change you or tame you, the world needs you as you are!Www@QuestionHome@Com

OMG very straight to the point!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very dark lol

give me an opinion on this poem if you can plzWww@QuestionHome@Com

OMG!
Careful on that shag!.!.!.you'll get rug burns!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah! Go get them!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

OMG well it don't sound like hes your God!. good luck Mr!. BuffWww@QuestionHome@Com

This is good stuff!.

They don't have dibs on your soul!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

<---he is SO not as deep as you are :(Www@QuestionHome@Com

its moving+deep!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I have been mad at God!. It passes!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com