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" FROM HOME TO HEAVEN"


I won’t let you leave

Why should you die!?

Staying by your side

Can go in blink of an eye




Morning arose

Peering at the bed

I had fallen asleep

And now he‘s dead




I can’t believe it

I never had the chance

Didn’t say goodbye

After my last glance




What can I do!?

There’s no where to go

Life without you

I don’t want to know





He had been taken

God had been true

A little darkness lifted

But I’m still without you




I will never forget

The days together

Every memory

You’re my love forever!.





Hey everyone, i'm 15 and i wrote this for no apparent reason!. yes it's made up and i hope you like it!.!.!.!.


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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Now this is a better poem!. I like this one, it has meat on it's bones!. Keep writing like this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Reminds me of when my Grandpa was dying, and my family went to visit him!. We knew he was going to pass, but I didn't think he would go so soon!.!.!.!.!.I remember falling asleep next to him (I was 10 at the time), and when I woke up, he had already passed on!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A father of boyfriend dieing and a person mourning their death!.

BTW that is an AWESOME poem i really liked it had great imaery i could see a person crying next to a hospital bed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I loved it!. Sad and happy at the same time is how I felt when I read your poem!. Sad for the one who lost the person that they care about and happy at the same time for the one in bed will no longer feel pain!.
Keep up the good write!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well, I like it! It reminds me of when someone I loved died and his funeral!. Great job read and rate my poem at!.!.!.
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Hi WOW that was my step daughter life!.
On 12/7 07 she woke up next to her 30 year old dead fiance!. Being a citified nurses aide, she did cpr to no avail!.!.!. wow Www@QuestionHome@Com

Forced in places!. Needs major revision!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It makes me think of having lost a loved one, person or pet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Don't quit your day job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's really sad, you should wright more poetry this is really good Www@QuestionHome@Com

I dunno, to me it sounded like the loss of a loved petWww@QuestionHome@Com

made me feel!.!.!.sad,as it shud!.!.so its pretty good!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow! I'm 16, and my BFF (I'd known her since my diaper days) died this summer!.!.!. instantly thought of her!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Jesus Christ!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com