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Question: Hey everyone!.!. This is my newest Poem!.!.!. please read =D !?
Familiar surrounding
The summer breeze
Unbearable heat
Swaying of trees

Burnt to a crisp
Mother did say
Forever Sunbaking
Outside all day

Never thinking
Of the coming years
The severe affects
Now bringing tears

It was my fault
I am to blame
My mistake
The cancer came



i wrote this in hope that it will remind kids that being sunsmart may be"Un Cool" but in years to come that could be the Least of their worries!.

I'm 15 and i made this up!. hope you like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
hey this poem was really cool!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.n thats really good i think uve written this poem on ur expirience!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.coz even i love 2 write poetry!.!.!.!.!.pls would u send some more!.!.!.!.!.!.!.2 me!.!.!.!.!.i really loved it!.!.!.
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It is very good for being only 15!. I like how you added a end note and how you are thinking of others!.
It is a very focused poem!.
Keep up with writing poetry!. :)
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Very good!. I think this speaks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

all ur poems are cool !.!.!.!.!.!.!.n this is one of themWww@QuestionHome@Com