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Question: I need help with this poem im trying to write!?
i never meant to hurt you
im sorry if i did
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what should i write next!? what rhymes with did!.!. that makes sense with what i am writing!.
help please!?
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I never meant to hurt you

I'm sorry if i did

I know that's why you hid

Do you know that i even drew!?

What we used to have

Before I messed up

And called you a chav

I loved you and you loved me

It used to be we

Now it's just "that woman" and "that man"

But I have a plan

I promise you i won't do it again

I'll even write it with pen

Sign it, date it

Now can we do it!?

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JK Lol

Instead of that last line, we could do:

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I never meant to hurt you,
I'm sorry if I did!.
Now I've gone and made you blue,
and you have gone and hid!.

I'm sorry if I hurt you,
and made you run and cry!.
Please come back and I'll be true
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I never meant to hurt you
I'm sorry if I did
These words are true
If all facts are hid
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