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Good Fit

Like the sea
fills the ocean floor
your love fits me so well

Like the heat
fills a hot air balloon
your love fits me so well

Like the lyrics
carry a sweet melody
your love fits me so well

Like a down coat
in the mountain cold
your love fits me so well

Like laughter echoes
through a canyon pass
your love fits me so well

Like the stars
fill heaven above
your love fits me so well

Like these words
fill an empty page
your love fits me so well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
If they don't know it fits, they won't wear it!.

"You can lead a horse to water
but faith is another matter"
The Black Crowes!.

http://au!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=lvqFkVNlWs!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice!. I'm not sure if I like how "your love fits me so well" is at the end of every stanza!. I think that its a smoother read if you just use that line in the 1st stanza and the last and leave it out in all the other ones!.
Beautiful!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Comfort fit is so much better!. I think it's just fine with the repetition of the last line!. But it flowed better for me when i omitted,"your love fits me so well" from all but the first and last lines only!.
Lovely poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

To be worn proudly every day, won't want to be taking off something that fits so well!. Leaves me with a pleasant smile!. Thank youWww@QuestionHome@Com

It's a perfect fit! I love it! Just the right size! Thanks, ma!Www@QuestionHome@Com

love is a glove that covers your hand with warmth!. good words on a sunday morn!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm like "like these words"!. They fit so well!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Perhaps, like four lips,
Like stairway steps,
Your words fit me
So well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

this poem is a perfect fit ; )Www@QuestionHome@Com

nice sentiments! use of Like gets redundant though!. But I think its part of your overall "look" to the poem!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

A very fitting poem of one who loves!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I loved reading this!.!.!.!.it certainly looks like a "good fit" to me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com