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Question: Is my poem good!? suggestions!?
Life
By : Margaret Henry

Life is like a volcanic eruption,
you never know when its going to blow,
or what will come out,
so don't expect the expected,
rather let it be a surprise,
and you'll be glad,
you allowed it to stay a,
mystery!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like it! A wise man or woman said, " Ignorance is bliss"!. In some cases , it can be!.
I like the " you allowed it to stay a - mystery!." Don't worry, life has its surprises!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it but rhyme more towards the end!.Www@QuestionHome@Com