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Question: Poem what you think about it !?
here's one for you but yours was ok to!.

there was a dog named sam
this dog looked at me like he di'nt give a dam
and one day we started to play
with his Frisbee's wouldent you say
well i looked at my feet as i took a seat
as i sat there i started to staer
o so sadly what did i see
my poor dog sam was not with me
he went to the road just as i did yell
sam what the h-e-l-l
sam looked back but then it was to late
my poor dog sam was in the suv's grate!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
You definitely have a talent for writing but I would encourage you to put your words into the passion of your soul then write from the heart and deliver the beauty that lays deep within you!. Don't cheat yourself out of an amazing experience because you may think poetry is uncool - embrace it and give the reader a piece to remember - you have got what it takes :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

freakyyyyyyyyyyyy!
its ok though



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