Panting are they
somehow in different ways
needs the same
met with resistance
how can it be
so alone as one
uncertain are they
why do they run!?
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somehow in different ways needs the same met with resistance how can it be so alone as one uncertain are they why do they run!? Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Actually!.!.!.!.I kind of got this one! But!.!.!.still, keep trying, the question is, are you enjoying this!?!?!? If so, it's well worth the effort!. maWww@QuestionHome@Com I love it Sister Buk! I don't know the "rules and regulations" of writing poetry, but I know what speaks from the heart, and this does!. I can relate to this!. **hugs**Www@QuestionHome@Com What the hell are you talking about here!? It is too short to convey emotion, too long on self pity!. Read more poetry, try again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Because the paint is wet to the touch in-so-much it's not dry that is why they run run run see how they runWww@QuestionHome@Com Interesting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I see, You are in LOVE !. :)) Www@QuestionHome@Com there is nothing to change!. it came from you and i loved this one too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |