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Question: Please help with this one!?
Panting are they
somehow in different ways

needs the same
met with resistance

how can it be
so alone as one

uncertain are they
why do they run!?

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Actually!.!.!.!.I kind of got this one!

But!.!.!.still, keep trying, the question is, are you enjoying this!?!?!?
If so, it's well worth the effort!.

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I love it Sister Buk! I don't know the "rules and regulations" of writing poetry, but I know what speaks from the heart, and this does!. I can relate to this!. **hugs**Www@QuestionHome@Com

What the hell are you talking about here!? It is too short to convey emotion, too long on self pity!. Read more poetry, try again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Because the paint
is wet to the touch
in-so-much
it's not dry
that is why
they run
run
run
see how they runWww@QuestionHome@Com

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I see, You are in LOVE !. :)) Www@QuestionHome@Com

there is nothing to change!. it came from you and i loved this one too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com