Do you like my poem about Love?

Question: Do you like my poem about Love!?

Love: Long Version

Love creates
its own
temple!.

It doesn't need
an architect or
a designer or
a critic!.

It doesn't even need
a Word!.

To begin is simple--

the simplest thing of all--

Just

love!.

--BOKO
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Unfortunately too many people are in love with the word love and use it so often that it can start to lose its meaning!.

But if you are in love and it doesn't matter if its a person or even a flavor of ice cream, there is no better feeling in the world!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Have the four year olds from preschool invaded our site!? What is this my friend!? Please, if you wish to express your feelings, learn about the standards of writing good poetry or switch your attention!. I wish you the best of luck in learning more about poetry!. Learn then write!. I wish not for the big fish to swallow you whole!. Good day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!. I would like to see more to it!. It starts off (to me) powerful, but it ends sudden!. I guess if you think about it sometimes love is that way!Www@QuestionHome@Com

wonders what the short version is!.!.!. this one is simple!.!.!. which is good!.!.!. just is!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it's beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it is a pretty poem!. Love comes upon us slowly drop by drop!.

BTW Josef A = assholeWww@QuestionHome@Com

I loved it boko!. Love is a verb, not a noun!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

noo not really sorry!.
its cheesy!.
&& theres no such ting as love!Www@QuestionHome@Com