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Artist and a Drug

The dead Mojo Pin of space,
The words say sing the songs in Grace!.
Lets hear you Buckley,
Jeff don’t you have luck to me,
Last goodbye, lets use the key unlock I’ll guarantee!.
Surprises of his greatness,
No credit for his lateness!.
Lilac wine colours the pitch black fine grow a spine,
Lets her you, sing the songs back, be mine show me a sign!.
Louder then louder,
You take the so real white powder!.
Mix it up, sniff that crack,
Hallelujah, kill yourself I dare you, take the smack!.
Lover, you should’ve come over,
Corpus Christi Carol roll over!.
Eternal Life,
Look at the tree,
Look at the branch,
Look at the leaf,
Look at the cells upon belief!.
The poems weird but has a point,
Look at the song Dream Brother doesn’t disappoint,!.
Tell your mother, call your brother,
Tell everyone then tell another!.
Forget her it all makes sense,
The albums here, and its in this poem causing suspense,
No pretence the albums Grace,
Embrace and replace,
We must trace!.
All the songs are here in this space
Just look at your CD case

By James

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