" Forever Friend"
child to man
son to father
friend to enemy
and back again
forever is the end
from two to all
from beggar to king
and back again
forever is a friend
from me to him
long and endless
my best friendWww@QuestionHome@Com
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child to man son to father friend to enemy and back again forever is the end from two to all from beggar to king and back again forever is a friend from me to him long and endless my best friendWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: i did not get that at all but it was better than i could ever writeWww@QuestionHome@Com its not my favorite!. really i got a sense of gay out of it, but i guess its promising for your first one!. keep practicing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |