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Question: Can you pick who you Love!?
One Perfect Pedal
A question sat before me
Bold in it's insistence
My concentraion waning
I drifted!.!.!.!.!.
faceless clouds in a field
supine, eyeing the bellies
it all weighed down on me
pushing me into clover
airs filled sweet, hinting
innate visions of right
minding me to the moments
knowing I had it in me
Singling one perfect daisy
I snapped back to my self
Pedals white, pulled at me
One by one, softly to ground
Centered heart, held it all
She Loves me, She Loves me not
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is very ironic, considering I just came inside from potting up my gerbera daisies!. They still looked so pretty I couldn't bear to toss them to the curb, so yes, you CAN pick who you love!
*PS!. I was going to point that out too, Ma, but I didn't want to be "picky!"Www@QuestionHome@Com
This lacked only one line at the end,
to finish it with:
"She Loves me!."
luv, is the word not petal rather than pedal!?
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I have found that you can love just about any one or at least find things in them to love!. Pedals pulling at you is a great thought, I liked that!. There are arranged marriages that work out and last longer than other marriages as well!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
No more than you can love who you pick all the time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
She loves you, just like ma said!.
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I think not!. Though I would wish it to be so!. Sweet poemWww@QuestionHome@Com
whats the question!?
no you cannot pick who you love
nice poemWww@QuestionHome@Com